Lǐwù and the teardrop stone

I have been rewriting Lǐwù and the teardrop stone the way I wanted to, however, at the time I was too afraid to because I did not know how people would react to the strange and magic world of Master Guardian. Because of the great feedback I been getting with regards to the current stories, I made the decision to redo it. Part one is ready to read on penana. I have been enjoying writing how I wanted to and I am already on part three. I am even considering updating Dampa and cursed village, because in my original notes, I was allowing Dampa to become Xuě méiguī (Snow rose). This is what the family call her in the Master Guardian series and it just seems odd now calling her Dampa when she is away from home. Also there is a lot of long sentences and not well written bits in the current version. This is another reason why I chose to rewrite Lǐwù and the teardrop stone. Already people are enjoying the rewrite and I hope to publish part two soon.